you say
only this one time more
you say, stay
I promise to tell you the truth
this time
and I won’t disappoint
you say
this time, as one of thousands
and I listen
and I care
and I love
in spite of all your vacillation
I try to support you
but my will is wilting
and my heart is aching
to see something grow –
beyond
your words
(APED prompt 8)
An emotional poem beautifully written.
SvarSlettvacillating feeling well captivated & nice take on the prompt :)
SvarSlettvacillating feeling well captivated & nice take on the prompt :)
SvarSlettThe story of so many relationships. But is it worth it? Is it worth staying when it is the millionth time?
SvarSlettI echo Cookie Crumb. even I'm not sure if it is worth it.
SvarSlettThe world lives and thrives on hope. Hope that everything will be good like before.nice take on the prompt.
SvarSlettGodt skreve!
SvarSlettI dag har eg tjuvlånt noko frå deg på Foreldremøte på jobben. Beklager! Men gav opp kilde altså.
Her er det eg lånte: http://englepappa.blogspot.no/2014/10/barnet-som-gar.html
Words if acquainted with complementing actions raise trust and strengthen bonding. If it is just word one come across a situation in which he questions himself if he has been after an illusion!
SvarSlettBeautiful!!