søndag 7. juni 2015

Wilt


you say
only this one time more

you say, stay
I promise to tell you the truth

this time
and I won’t disappoint

you say
this time, as one of thousands

and I listen
and I care

and I love
in spite of all your vacillation

I try to support you
but my will is wilting

and my heart is aching
to see something grow –

beyond
your words



(APED prompt 8)

8 kommentarer:

  1. An emotional poem beautifully written.

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  2. vacillating feeling well captivated & nice take on the prompt :)

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  3. vacillating feeling well captivated & nice take on the prompt :)

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  4. The story of so many relationships. But is it worth it? Is it worth staying when it is the millionth time?

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  5. I echo Cookie Crumb. even I'm not sure if it is worth it.

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  6. The world lives and thrives on hope. Hope that everything will be good like before.nice take on the prompt.

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  7. Godt skreve!

    I dag har eg tjuvlånt noko frå deg på Foreldremøte på jobben. Beklager! Men gav opp kilde altså.
    Her er det eg lånte: http://englepappa.blogspot.no/2014/10/barnet-som-gar.html

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  8. Words if acquainted with complementing actions raise trust and strengthen bonding. If it is just word one come across a situation in which he questions himself if he has been after an illusion!
    Beautiful!!

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