fredag 12. juni 2015

Two minutes more



he was a braggart
by heart

- whatever you do
I’ll do it two minutes more!

so I walked on my hands,
he did it – two minutes longer

I ran my legs off
he lasted – two minutes more

I kept my mouth quiet
but spoke – two minutes before him

then I fell into sleep
he woke – two  minutes later

and so we went on,
my annoyance grew tall

at last I decided to hold my breath
and he – 



8 kommentarer:

  1. A bright idea! Very nice take on the prompt.

    SvarSlett
  2. LOL :D Wonder if he lasted the two minutes more. Lovely take :)

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    I request you to give a word prompt for Set The Challenge Sunday day after tomorrow :)
    Please give a comment either on an A P E D post or at my blog before Saturday noon (India time).

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    SvarSlett
  3. I liked it very much..A very unique take on the prompt.. I am sure he breathed.. :))

    Do take two minutes more to read me here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2015/06/on-edge-of-night.html

    SvarSlett
  4. Oh, how very clever! I really liked this. Great job with the prompt!

    SvarSlett