tirsdag 2. juni 2015

Before dawn

my earth is unmaking
the greatness we built

in the dark, silent night
before dawn makes it way

all the ruins are outlined
against the dim light of moon

breath, my heavy heart
you child of the north

when the sun arises
the blindfold will fall

and a new, golden city
will occur from the mist



(APED prompt 3)

8 kommentarer:

  1. "the earth is unmaking, all that we built" i just loved it

    SvarSlett
  2. EXCELLENT first line.

    SvarSlett
  3. When the Sun arises the blindfold will fall...

    This is so very beautiful.. Loved it.. Great to be here after a long time..

    RS:)

    SvarSlett
  4. I agree with Gazal! The opening couplet is just wonderful. :)

    SvarSlett