søndag 1. juni 2014

Retreat






(Haiku horizons)

9 kommentarer:

  1. Inspiring! Love the cadence of your words

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  2. Beautiful. The partial rhyme of gate and case works. it flows really well.

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  3. Very nice and beautifully said..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/06/when-fine-she-retreats-haiku.html

    RS

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  4. the open gate and open hands, nice juxtaposition

    much love...

    SvarSlett
  5. Since the way is clearly through the gate, who would not want to retreat?

    Afternoon Retreat

    SvarSlett