Herleg!God natt :-)
Inspiring! Love the cadence of your words
Beautiful. The partial rhyme of gate and case works. it flows really well.
Very nice and beautifully said.. http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/06/when-fine-she-retreats-haiku.htmlRS
the open gate and open hands, nice juxtapositionmuch love...
Very nice set of Haiku.
Since the way is clearly through the gate, who would not want to retreat?Afternoon Retreat